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Old 12-22-2012, 07:57 AM   #2
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Re: Rate this review: Super Mario Galaxy 1 & 2 (Wii)

Hello 1206.

This review is a thinly-veiled attack on the game, from a extremely passive-aggressive stance. I know it has been stated on this site and others that reviews are essentially subjective, but if you are going to slam a game, then the actual criticisms should be founded on something that the reader can identify as an objective assessment of the issue. Intimating that "that's fine" for "the mouth-breathing masses" isn't going to cut it.

You obviously hate this game so much that it is a strange selection to put all the hard work of writing a review into.

If there are any positives here, you have the format and the length right. And you look like a decent writer. But it needs a complete re-write so that your own prejudices don't shine through.

Three things would help:
1 Take a step back
2 Lose the hyperbole (no logically thinking person on Earth)
3 Change the tone. It is whiny
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