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Old 03-09-2012, 10:17 AM   #6
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Re: Rate this Review - Syndicate

you should avoid using 'you' I think in that the review is yours, not ours. Tell us what your impression and experiences were, without telling me what you think mine is going to be based on your experience----- understand? Sentences like 'Killing is what you were made for' disassociate your opinion, your experience, and sound more like an advertisement, not like you, therefore kindof dishonest. Don't be afraid of your opinion such that you try to window-dress it with cool sounding cliches.

Be yourself.
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