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Old 03-04-2012, 12:01 AM   #3
Jaradcel
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Re: Sonic the Hedgehog, or How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love my Mortality

I felt like this wasn't so much a review as it was a rambling blog post to be honest.

There are good reviews that don't "look" like a review - See for instance Rock Paper Shotgun's impressions on Syndicate's single player - but this felt like it was just a stream-of-consciousness article.

That's not to say what you've written is *BAD*, but it certainly could do with a lot more tightening up in terms of word length and grammatical usage to get your points across.
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