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Old 10-16-2011, 12:17 PM   #2
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Re: Please Rate This Review - Portal 2

a few small crits:

Not everyone has played the original Portal, so some of your appeals to authority on that matter would be off-putting to someone new to the game (in general it's good to avoid to saying things like 'as we all know-').

I like your premise, that playing the original enhances and sabotages the Portal 2 experience, but if your piece is meant to compare and contrast, maybe it would be a better conclusion?

Otherwise, I think this is a fine first draft.

Welcome to the forum, btw!
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