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Old 07-09-2011, 04:51 PM   #7
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Re: Please Rate This Review: Dead or Alive: Dimensions

I edited sentence 2, but does it still address Richard's issue of not mentioning this is a fighting game series well enough?

In paragraph 4, I changed the talk of sparse to "has little depth." There are plenty of modes, but the content within them is sparse.

Yes, it is true that you can't control the alternate. Not sure why, but maybe that's for co-op and not fixed for single player mode.

Fixed the flare/flair screw up, though I did picture the latest Star Trek when you mentioned it. *doh!*

I also went in and cut some parts of the talk on arcade and tag mode and combined others. Maybe it flows better now.

Thanks for the feedback, Sparky. Really appreciated. I'll keep checking back for more fixes.
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