Hey Decabo, this is almost ready as-is, but there's a few things to look at.
- "Sonic doesn't insta-drown when he touches water anymore." Sonic actually went into water in almost all of the Genesis games. Maybe you mean something different here?
- Move the 4th and 5th paragraphs to where they are after the 1st paragraph. The mechanical discussion fits better right after your opening, and the plot parts segue nicely into the part about voice acting.
Nice job-you've been turning out some good stuff lately.