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Old 02-17-2010, 06:00 PM   #6
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Re: Please Rate this Review: DARK VOID

Needs a little punctuation clean-up here and there but nothign major... the edited version is a much tighter read, yet retains the flavor.

Green light from me. Other Critics?
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