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Brad Gallaway · 02-17-2010, 06:00 PM

Needs a little punctuation clean-up here and there but nothign major... the edited version is a much tighter read, yet retains the flavor.

Green light from me. Other Critics?

02-17-2010, 06:00 PM	#6
Brad Gallaway Demons are defeated Join Date: May 2002 Location: Seattle, Washington Posts: 3,982 Rep Power: 19	Re: Please Rate this Review: DARK VOID Needs a little punctuation clean-up here and there but nothign major... the edited version is a much tighter read, yet retains the flavor. Green light from me. Other Critics? __________________ Drink Coffeecola. It's good and good for you! My Blog on Writing and Gaming