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coyls3 · 02-08-2010, 09:30 PM

With the exception of your use of second person and the length of the review, I like it.

The only advise I would give is to not use second person and to try and trim it to around 1000 words.

02-08-2010, 09:30 PM	#2
coyls3 32-bit Poster Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: southern virginia Posts: 289 Rep Power: 4	Re: Please Rate this Review: DARK VOID With the exception of your use of second person and the length of the review, I like it. The only advise I would give is to not use second person and to try and trim it to around 1000 words.