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Old 02-08-2010, 09:30 PM   #2
coyls3
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Re: Please Rate this Review: DARK VOID

With the exception of your use of second person and the length of the review, I like it.

The only advise I would give is to not use second person and to try and trim it to around 1000 words.
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