Re: Please Rate This Review: Fallout 3
That was a very well written review. I haven't played Fallout 3, but reading this piece, I really get a feel for the dark view of the retro-50's milieu that the game is based upon.
Excellent grammar and vocabulary. The only thing I noticed is "...as the protagonist grows in their powers," which should be "his" powers.
I think you map out flaws nicely as well. I probably wouldn't reference general critiques of the game; you could remove that without hurting anything.
I'd approve this for publishing to our home page, with the same caveats that Brad suggests: a touch of trimming, plus the addition of High/Low/WTF and consumer advice per our style guide (see any published review for example). If you're interested, please make these updates and we can post it.
Keep on writin'!