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Old 04-21-2009, 07:50 PM   #5
aoki
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Re: Please rate this review: Fallout 3

still needs a lot of work i'm afraid.

here is a classic article that points out some common mistakes in critical writing:

http://www.apostate.com/how-say-nothing-500-words

read the tips at the end and apply what they say to your own work. let us know how you go. good luck.
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