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Old 03-15-2009, 12:24 AM   #2
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Re: Please rate this review: Dead Space

Hey there,

Please don't take this the wrong way, but this review is really rough and not quite ready for prime time. My suggestion would be to read at least three or four reviews on Dead Space from sites like ours and others, analyze the styles and content, and then rewrite the piece from scratch.

Thanks for posting, and I'll be glad to take a look at anything else you'd like to submit.
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