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Brad Gallaway · 02-14-2009, 03:11 PM

Hey Dan.

Thanks for the review.

You’ve got some good points and I can definitely tell that you've put some time in with the game, but my primary feedback would be to slice this thing probably in half. There's a lot of unnecessary detail that distracts the reader from your points, and it was hard to follow the flow.
I'd say trim the fat and resubmit, and if you want more feedback after that, I'd be glad to give it.

Thanks for the read!

02-14-2009, 03:11 PM	#2
Brad Gallaway Demons are defeated Join Date: May 2002 Location: Seattle, Washington Posts: 3,982 Rep Power: 19	Re: Can you just give me feedback on my review? Rainbow Six Vegas 2 Hey Dan. Thanks for the review. You’ve got some good points and I can definitely tell that you've put some time in with the game, but my primary feedback would be to slice this thing probably in half. There's a lot of unnecessary detail that distracts the reader from your points, and it was hard to follow the flow. I'd say trim the fat and resubmit, and if you want more feedback after that, I'd be glad to give it. Thanks for the read! __________________ Drink Coffeecola. It's good and good for you! My Blog on Writing and Gaming Last edited by Brad Gallaway; 02-14-2009 at 03:13 PM.