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Old 02-14-2009, 03:11 PM   #2
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Re: Can you just give me feedback on my review? Rainbow Six Vegas 2

Hey Dan.

Thanks for the review.

You’ve got some good points and I can definitely tell that you've put some time in with the game, but my primary feedback would be to slice this thing probably in half. There's a lot of unnecessary detail that distracts the reader from your points, and it was hard to follow the flow.
I'd say trim the fat and resubmit, and if you want more feedback after that, I'd be glad to give it.


Thanks for the read!
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