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Old 01-01-2009, 09:26 AM   #8
Jason Karney
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Re: Please rate this review: Prince of Persia

That's the two staff approvals, so we can work on getting you to the homepage.

I notice that you've avoided second person, and the use of unnecessary quotes in the text. Great!

We'll work on getting you posted. The last thing you need for that to occur is some further description in the parent's guide; something about what parents should (or not) consider in buying this game for their children. Check any of our reviews for an example; it only needs to be a sentence or two, but something more than ESRB descriptors.

Nice job.

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