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Old 12-08-2008, 01:30 AM   #2
Brad Gallaway
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Re: Please rate this review: BioShock

Hey Izz.

This is some pretty good writing.

The only issue I would bring up is that if this was to run as a main (or 'first') review, it doesn't go into quite enough detail to properly illustrate what the game is not for people who may not have heard of it (uh, all two of them...)

however, if it was running as a second opinion, I think I would probably put it up as-is, no edits necessary.

a fine piece of work, sir. you get a gold star from me.
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