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Old 11-11-2008, 06:25 PM   #6
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Re: Little Big Planet (part 1)- Please Rate This Review

Hi S.N.F. -

just wanted to say that I basically echo Jason's comments pretty much down the line.

Primarily, I think it's too long and the potency of the points you make get lost in the sheer volume of the article. More than anything else, I think the strength of your arguments would only be amplified if the piece was about half the length that it is now.

I like your approach and I liked what you had to say, and I think this would be a great counterpoint piece to all of the cheerleader-type reviews out there with just a little work.
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