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Old 10-12-2008, 07:45 PM   #2
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Re: No More Heroes -- Please rate this review

hey UltimoCroft, thanks for the review.

Quick impressions:

> overall, this review would benefit from being a little more streamlined... being maybe about half the length it is now would give it more pop.

> the first four paragraphs are spent sort of qualifying the things you're about to say... no need to be so cautious. make a bold statement!

> the tone is pretty conversational. maybe kick it up a notch in terms of formality and you'll be in business.

thanks for posting!
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