Re: No More Heroes -- Please rate this review
hey UltimoCroft, thanks for the review.
> overall, this review would benefit from being a little more streamlined... being maybe about half the length it is now would give it more pop.
> the first four paragraphs are spent sort of qualifying the things you're about to say... no need to be so cautious. make a bold statement!
> the tone is pretty conversational. maybe kick it up a notch in terms of formality and you'll be in business.
thanks for posting!