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Old 10-11-2008, 09:18 AM   #3
Jason Karney
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Re: Star Wars: The force Unleashed-Please rate this review

That second paragraph contains a lot of good points. It would benefit if it were broken into a couple of paragraphs and smoothed out.

Nice coverage overall. I agree with Brad that it feels a bit too informal. Nothing that a round of editing couldn't adjust.

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